Comments on: When I was young.. https://asthajain.in/i-was-younger/ My Blog Sun, 26 Nov 2023 12:35:38 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.8.3 By: Swagat kar https://asthajain.in/i-was-younger/#comment-223 Mon, 10 Jul 2017 06:42:20 +0000 https://buddingpoets.wordpress.com/?p=597#comment-223 Hi astha … lovely to meet a fellow poet whose thoughts are so noble
And I wish you for all your dreams to come true

]]> By: Nova https://asthajain.in/i-was-younger/#comment-222 Tue, 14 Feb 2017 14:39:50 +0000 https://buddingpoets.wordpress.com/?p=597#comment-222 I like the idea behind the lines.

But I think there’s a lot of room for you to improve.

If you wouldn’t mind, I would like to say that you should open up more.

I feel that you have more things to say which you are holding back.

Let the world hear the beautiful voice of your heart.

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